THE WILSONITE : Reloaded

Reduced number of confused rambling adolescents, same messed up blog, 2nd year of awesome fun! cut loose!!!

Tuesday, November 08, 2005

Honour in one eye and death I’ th’ other

Well, honour is the subject of my story...
I live with it... can’t live without it...

I think of this life, of what it has been...
I awe things such as myself, which trod upon this planet...
I was born free as... everyone, so were you...
I dare not weep for what has happened...
Because it’s what I chose and made it to be...
And men at some times are masters of their own fates...

For eyes see not itself... but by reflection...

Each of us full of hidden worthiness in our eyes...
Each of us full of hidden secrets in our eyes...
Each of us full of hidden love in our eyes...
Each of us full of hidden hatred in our eyes...


But yet we judge ourselves with our own shadows...
Because we know not of such mirrors...which reflect reality...

I would laugh on circumstances... all the while turning into one myself...

Troubled I am now of with passions of some difference...
I pluck each moment from its past...and question it...
Knowing not, what to make out of the answers I get...

The world rests on a blink of an eye-lid...
And the game is only beautiful till we blink again...


I dare not shut my eyes... ‘cus I m living again...
If its a dream... never should it end...
Sigh... its life...just as it should be...
Lets live with honour in one eye and death in the other...
Looking through both... differently...

Sahirr

(give me comments...this piece Definitely needs a re-write)

6 Comments:

  • At 9:27 PM, Blogger THE WILSONITE said…

    This DOES need a rewrite. A once over edit at least.

    Can't qiut grasp what you meant by

    *I awe things such as myself.*

    The second verse ends with "in our eyes" too many times. Maybe that was intentional, but it's also a little annoying.

     
  • At 9:38 PM, Blogger THE WILSONITE said…

    "I awe things as myself...." is perfectly right..."in our eyes..." is right too...cus its Shakespearean...lingo....

    sahirr....

     
  • At 9:58 PM, Blogger THE WILSONITE said…

    I never said they're wrong chum, I said I couldnt quite grasp what you MEANT by them!

     
  • At 11:04 PM, Blogger THE WILSONITE said…

    really i told you once im telling you again....dont bite of more than you can chew..you say a re-write...i say do what you can not act too big for your boots....Troubled I am now of with passions of some difference...I would laugh on circumstances... all the while turning into one myself...
    it really sounds....wannabe-ish...do something simple first.

    siddhant

     
  • At 11:04 PM, Blogger THE WILSONITE said…

    k..."i awe things as myself"...means..i am im impressed by fellow human beings....they r gr8 creations.....
    sahirr

     
  • At 7:48 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    erm.. sure u guys... sure..

    tanvi...

    (no ones gonna b in the mood for my oraclular nonsense)

     

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